better writing?(5)

Well it seems to me that my biggest problem that was noticed from the V from vendetta rhetorical analysis was organization. I need to separate my ideas into different paragraphs. I also need to write an introductory paragraph. Also my paper had some fluidity issues. This problem will solve itself over time. I have not wrote a graded paper in a year so I expected there to be some issues with this. But I'd have to say that my biggest problem when I was writing this paper was the procrastination. I waited until the last second to write the paper so i was rushed and didn't do the best job that i could. The next paper that I write will be "whole assed"